I feel rain…
I feel the wind
I feel the water…
Again, I hear that murmur running across these veins,
As your silence deepens
Beyond the music -
Far from the dusty streets of chaotic life,
Crushing in the uncertainly of pain.
I feel like breaking free ---
I feel like holding you.
May be it’s the truth of my imaginative world.
But I feel you.
Wanting to catch up to the moments,
The moments, I was lost in words.
May be,
Touching the path we never stepped on.
Breaking the windows we never opened.
I see those dreams I never dreamt.
Yes,
I feel that rain again…
4 comments:
bhalo ..tobe ki janis ??? tui banglay likhle je feel ta ase... eitay pelam na
porlum tor post ta...tobe bapar hochhe topic ta boddo common...anekei oi topic niye baddo lekhe...basto jibon,jantrik life.,bristite bhijbo,akla kandbo,tomake chunte chai,harye jete chai etc etc...kintu keu life er bhalotto niye lekhena..karon dukhhe er modhhe je lukono glamor ta ache, seta sukhe hoeto nei...[:)]
kobita ami akdom bujhina..tobe tor ta ektu soja chilo..tai bujhte perechi..subject matter ta amar pochhondo hoeni [:)]
eta ke ninde bhabisna.. honest constructive criticism!! [:)]
thik achhe but better likis er theke onek,satisfaction tor aseni asa kori.
Was a good read.. :)
Regards,
RAvi.
(http://j-ravi.blogspot.com)
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